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I've never before felt this way
The way I feel for thee
It hurts so much I start to weep
I die slowly, ever slowly inside

My emotions are all jumbled
How can all this be real?
This feeling for thee is ever powerful
It's as if the world around disappears

Alas, how can I love thee
When thy heart aches for another
This heart of mine crumbles to dust
How is this happening, happening to me?

I try to push forward
Allow myself to give to thee thy freedom
Yet I'm constantly hurting
I shall never again become fully alive

I've never before felt this way
A feeling thou shalt never feel for me

                                           - BrknLnlySoul
©2007-2008 ~squirrels-need2-die
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Submitted: November 18, 2007
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This poem was written on a day that I was feeling extremely low confidence in myself. It was also the day when I got my heart broken by a "squirrel." D:
Neways, in this poem, I attempted repetition in a way I never have before. It was actually an interesting combination with the other few literary elements I allowed myself to use.
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